What is Love... baby, don't hurt me...
By Antonios Maltezos
”Neanderthal!”
I think she’s saying it has something to do with my skull, the bones of my face.
“We aren’t meant for each other. You never put the seat down,” she says, shaking her head. “And I can’t keep wiping your crumbs off the counter.”
“But they’re not my crumbs,” I say. “I’ve stopped eating.”
“Don’t you understand?” she screeches, squeezing her fist, her painted nails like dripping blood.
“I do,” I whisper. She wants me gone from here, but I'm weakened from malnourishment, and my heart is palpitating, my lips pursed as if I want a kiss. I’m not feeling very well. She pauses with me, and then jumps as if she’s on fire. Freaks right out, saying she hates me. She hates me.
I know. I want to tell her that I know, but there’s something halting about the way she pulls at her hair rather than tear me to pieces -- stops my breath.
(originally published at Quicktion online.)
”Neanderthal!”
I think she’s saying it has something to do with my skull, the bones of my face.
“We aren’t meant for each other. You never put the seat down,” she says, shaking her head. “And I can’t keep wiping your crumbs off the counter.”
“But they’re not my crumbs,” I say. “I’ve stopped eating.”
“Don’t you understand?” she screeches, squeezing her fist, her painted nails like dripping blood.
“I do,” I whisper. She wants me gone from here, but I'm weakened from malnourishment, and my heart is palpitating, my lips pursed as if I want a kiss. I’m not feeling very well. She pauses with me, and then jumps as if she’s on fire. Freaks right out, saying she hates me. She hates me.
I know. I want to tell her that I know, but there’s something halting about the way she pulls at her hair rather than tear me to pieces -- stops my breath.
(originally published at Quicktion online.)
13 Comments:
Hey, that's the best word here, Tony, halting. Nice piece.
meaning that it's a great word choice, if that wasn't clear. carries so much with it.
Joe
Weird and wonderful, Tony. Love the title!
Way to start off the month, Tony!
Sounds like love to me!
Thanks for stopping by, folks! I thought a question might be appropriate for day one.
ohhh...stopped me in my tracks my friend, halting, wonderfulxoxo
oh my, trying to post a comment!!! I love this tony, it stopped me, halting, love it, love it, thank you for sharing it with us.xoxoxo
oh my, trying to post a comment!!! I love this tony, it stopped me, halting, love it, love it, thank you for sharing it with us.xoxoxo
Geez, Antonios, the local police are going to cite you for 'ridiculously cute.'
Diane Smith
The Maple Room
oh my, trying to post a comment!!! I love this tony, it stopped me, halting, love it, love it, thank you for sharing it with us.xoxoxo
Stop, Patricia! Stop! We're drowning in your posts!
Good drama here, Tony. Like a solid roux after a long simmer, you've managed to boil it all down to a few words, a few gestures, the bare essentials.
Russell
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